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01, Intro [002]

May 15th, 2015, 12:00 am

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Reply Incuro, August 17th, 2012, 8:19 pm

The first two are really the same for the page, mainly just focus on art.. not to much you can improve on otherwise.

3rd panel, again the cursed window (I knew it would be there even before I saw this page... good work on remembering to keep it there though!). Again this is mostly art, the 4th member can be easily cut or replaced if we don't keep him, and probably should put our friend the streetlight behind them, but further back.

Overall, climax page, so it should be more art then dialogue its a physical not a psychological climax. Though the 2nd's little comment should be kept, but maybe made a bit less obvious to those not looking directly at him, its really more to fill the blank space of that wall (not plot relevant).

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